The Black Out Chapter 2

Day 4 of the blackout It was dark and stormy I was scared because we had no light and our torches were dead. I layed in my room thinking when would this end. The next morning I woke up my parents were gone I went to my brother and said, “where is mum & dad” and he replied “I don’t know” then I went to my sister but I could not ask because her door was shut that meant she was sleeping so I just went back to my room and layed there and fell asleep.

BOOM!!! I woke up yelled what is happened my brother ran to me and said, “get up and follow me”. so I started to follow then he stopped and I stopped he looked at me and said “it your turn to die” then ran and trapped me into a corner then stabbed me I woke shouting “ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!! then lucky it was just a dream” ,I said. Mum & dad ran to my room and said, “What going on!!” I replied “it all right, it all right it was just a bad dream”. my brother walked into my room I got scared then ran behind my dad mum looked at and said, “ what wrong johny”

“everything is wrong this should not be happening I was supposed to have the best holiday ever why why this went the best to worst” ,john said

Next time chapter 3: sister can’t take it any more

the boys leave to go find there sister well they mum and dad are gone to are meeting for something important but it is a secret

The Black Out Chapter 1

Hi my name is john west I live in G.I which stands for Glenn Innes which is in Auckland. It was the last day of school I was thinking in my head what should I do in the holidays. I got too excited that I yelled “YES!!” everyone looked at me strange then my teacher mr somerville he was an annoying and who kept speaking and speaking he said, “What, who said that” and everyone replied, “It was John” and then Mr replied, “John you are staying in for 5 minutes and if you talk back and extra 5”.After School I stayed inside because I had to own my minutes when I was done he was saying something I couldn’t hear because I was still daydreaming about what should I do in the holidays but I heard some of it he said, “it is coming soon” I was thinking is he crazy or what. then he looked at me and said, “you can go now”. when I left I was scared then I thought what is coming soon.

Two days later that when it came. When I woke up I saw my brother he was in the sitting room and I was thinking thats strange he is usually at work with my dad he turned to me and said, “the city powers off”. I thought he was lying so I went turned the t.v. on and it didn’t worked so it was true. Man I was angry I really was looking forward to playing game. My mum told me to play cards with my sister and brother so I did when we were playing in the sitting It was soo boring. I looked at the t.v. and it turned on then I yelled “THE POWERS BACK ON” my brother Josh raced to his room and played on his ps3 I ask if I could and he said, “ I ain't going to play i'm going to watch videos”. After like 20 minutes the power turned back off my brother got angry that he punched the wall then we turn back to playing cards.

The Next day see what happens would the powers turn back on and stay on or would it stay off for ever.

My Good/Successful writing parcitice

I am going to tell you how to be a Good and Successful student at school or at home. you have too follow these steps first you have to pay attention to your teachers or parent, be polite to adults and young ones to, show respect to everyone, love, care and sharing is caring.

And now I am going to tell you how to do it. first how to pay attention you need to make sure that your eyes on the teacher let them know that you are ready to learn or the one how is speaking but not the one speaking on the mat because they're just going to get you in trouble. second be polite to the adult and little ones adult are older than you so might want to show respect because if you don’t they might think that your parent are bad and they don’t show respect to anyone and be kind to young one so they can follow your foot steps and be like you nice, kind, loving and caring.

What not to do when you are trying to show respect or be nice and care. when you are trying to show respect do not go over the limit when you show too much respect that some of your friend might not want to hang out with you anymore and that everyone start to think you are too nice and you can’t do anything bad.