The Black Out Chapter 1

Hi my name is john west I live in G.I which stands for Glenn Innes which is in Auckland. It was the last day of school I was thinking in my head what should I do in the holidays. I got too excited that I yelled “YES!!” everyone looked at me strange then my teacher mr somerville he was an annoying and who kept speaking and speaking he said, “What, who said that” and everyone replied, “It was John” and then Mr replied, “John you are staying in for 5 minutes and if you talk back and extra 5”.After School I stayed inside because I had to own my minutes when I was done he was saying something I couldn’t hear because I was still daydreaming about what should I do in the holidays but I heard some of it he said, “it is coming soon” I was thinking is he crazy or what. then he looked at me and said, “you can go now”. when I left I was scared then I thought what is coming soon.

Two days later that when it came. When I woke up I saw my brother he was in the sitting room and I was thinking thats strange he is usually at work with my dad he turned to me and said, “the city powers off”. I thought he was lying so I went turned the t.v. on and it didn’t worked so it was true. Man I was angry I really was looking forward to playing game. My mum told me to play cards with my sister and brother so I did when we were playing in the sitting It was soo boring. I looked at the t.v. and it turned on then I yelled “THE POWERS BACK ON” my brother Josh raced to his room and played on his ps3 I ask if I could and he said, “ I ain't going to play i'm going to watch videos”. After like 20 minutes the power turned back off my brother got angry that he punched the wall then we turn back to playing cards.

The Next day see what happens would the powers turn back on and stay on or would it stay off for ever.

My Good/Successful writing parcitice

I am going to tell you how to be a Good and Successful student at school or at home. you have too follow these steps first you have to pay attention to your teachers or parent, be polite to adults and young ones to, show respect to everyone, love, care and sharing is caring.

And now I am going to tell you how to do it. first how to pay attention you need to make sure that your eyes on the teacher let them know that you are ready to learn or the one how is speaking but not the one speaking on the mat because they're just going to get you in trouble. second be polite to the adult and little ones adult are older than you so might want to show respect because if you don’t they might think that your parent are bad and they don’t show respect to anyone and be kind to young one so they can follow your foot steps and be like you nice, kind, loving and caring.

What not to do when you are trying to show respect or be nice and care. when you are trying to show respect do not go over the limit when you show too much respect that some of your friend might not want to hang out with you anymore and that everyone start to think you are too nice and you can’t do anything bad.

Reading A Map

Today I have learnt about compass directions. I can place symbols on a map. I also learnt how to find locations by following a given directions. By learning my compass direction I never get loss to go place. Never eat soggy weetbix is going to help to remember the compass directions.

Sun safety explanation Writing

Sunblock can keep you from getting skin cancer, And a hat that covers your face from the sun,sunglasses that keep your eyes shaded from the sun because you would get blind.

Sunblock keep your skin nice and protected from the sun. Sunscreen acts like a very thin bulletproof vest. When you swim make sure you have waterproof sunscreen. When it comes to sun exposure, however, what you can't see will hurt you.

Hats protect your face the sunlight. If you don’t wear one you can get skin cancer on your face and also get fricklas. You need to wear a hat because Around 2,100 people died from skin cancer in 2012 in the UK, that's around 6 every day.

Sunglasses help your eyes to see better.It would protect it and keep it from making your eyes watery.Did you now that if you don’t wear sunglasses when its sunny your eyes can turn red and be sore.

Sunblock, hat and sunglasses can help us keep safe in the sun.

My Holiday Highlight

During the holidays I really didn't do that much stuff. Then on sunday my dad told us get up and change which is me and my sisters: Vei and Amelia. So we all dressed after 5 or 10 minutes I think, because girls like my mum take long to do they hair and pick outfit . When we got there it was really packed all the parking was full then we parked in the driveway.

After we got out the car we headed for the church Me and my mum could hear music it started to get louder and louder until we saw it was and music band from the church up the road. When they finished we started setting up the tables and putting the food on it we finished then people from the church up the road we let them go first because that way we do it.They all were all finished then it was our turn to eat after like 5 or 4 minute we were done then music started and all these women stood up and started to dance.

It was dark and I was tired my mum was tireder than me because she stayed up all night to get all the food done I had to talk to her keep her from sleeping. I thought we were going home but we were actually going to my uncle’s house because my uncle’s dad brother died in Tonga so all we did was just prayed for him. After we prayed we finally went home and slept. NEXT DAY....

Hey thank you for reading my story hope you enjoyed it. I felt really good writing this story and my favourite part was actually writing this story so yeah thanks again. I might make part 2 next week so stay tuned for part 2 oh and tell me what is your favourite part of my story by commenting on the bottom.