tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-261724550410252248.post6742760081286678214..comments2016-12-27T17:41:10.458-08:00Comments on Tevita: Tevita Superhero Creative WritingPES Blogs 2013 Adminhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03043164228733682681noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-261724550410252248.post-3147130161444772422014-07-03T22:53:48.159-07:002014-07-03T22:53:48.159-07:00Nice work Tevita. You have such creative ideas, ke...Nice work Tevita. You have such creative ideas, keep pushing yourself to get your work finished. It is awesome!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03398633367561306144noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-261724550410252248.post-40624156260204179962014-07-02T16:01:25.571-07:002014-07-02T16:01:25.571-07:00Tevita
I really enjoyed this piece of creative nar...Tevita<br />I really enjoyed this piece of creative narrative writing. You've paragraphed really well, nice and clearly. I think its impressive you've made such a positive use of punctuation and used language features clearly. I like how the story had excitement in it from your writing and I liked how the ending led me to think more about the characters and what happened to them next.<br />Mr Webb and Room One, Auroa Primary School, Taranaki.<br />mrwebbauroa.blogspot.comMyles Webbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11704260211657629525noreply@blogger.com